WAKE UP SID!
A,B,C,D,E so on, and upto zee!
We use them in clusters everyday for free,
We earn beacause of them,we make money,
Millions of children donot even know these alphabets, OH,IRONY?
Oh I am sorry I shudnt have said that,instead-:
Burgers,pizzas, coldrinks, yummy oh yummy food,
Son give a pie to this begger, no dad I am not in mood,
Millions sleep with a smile because today they had food two times,
Millions cannot sleep because they overate this time,
Oh, did it hurt? It did, right?
You did not sleep? You overate last night?
Oh I am sorry I shudnt have said that,instead-:
Nike, ADI, GUCCI, ARMANI, well this list is pretty long,
Jeans, t-shirts,shoes,forget all we pay thousands for thongs,
Birthday party in a club is so scoring,
Donating a blanket on the day is boring?
We are proud to be humans,because we know how to show off,
But guess what humanity would say to us “FCUK OFF”
Oh I am sorry I shudnt have said that,instead-:
I should have just said “WAKE UP SID”!!!!!
About Me
- rAHUL JOshi
- i like writing poems since childhood,though i dont follow any of the famous poets,my style of wriiting is both kidish and mature at the same time,i like exploring myself,and would love to know how human mind works...
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ReplyDeletei wonder........wat the world has to say on this one...
ReplyDeletei am only looking for different A,B,C,D and Eees..so that i can comment something...
It simply takes u on a 100% guilt ride..n leaves with u a big after effect and u jz endup giving a mocking smile to urself wondering what u r n actually upto..!Thanks for the wakeup call..!
nice thought there... but aahhh!!! just a thought. I pity those who don't wish to give the pie to the beggar, those who overeat,those who find donating blankets boring and those who pay thousands for just a tag... but you know who i pity more? it's us. because we, too, do the same thing; we waste money on alcohol for few minutes of fun; waste our money on cigarettes; we waste hundreds, if not thousands,over brand-tags; but we don't donate blankets on our bdays either; Here is a better example of irony... we sit back in the room while cursing others for not doing anything for those poor people out there and PRETEND to care about them.
ReplyDelete@mr. Anonymous-well thanx for the aprreciation but actualy its all about us,that includes me,you,every one,i understand what you are trying to say,but i cudnt stp myself frm replyin u,with all the respect sir i would like to say derz nt a little amount of PRETENCE in the text,it involves all of us....all!and yeh no petying here too!
ReplyDeletekul , the idea is gr8, i liked the "tounge in cheek" humar finaly coming good for something good.Start was a bit shaky but the idea finally presented to its full effect .
ReplyDeleteova to the cynic
cynic says( for editing and futhur writing)
1. "Wake up sid", the title n the punch not compatible with the actual poem.For me the poem started with line2
2.correction-Millions of children donot even know these alphabets, OH,IRONY!
3.correction-shudn't
n with due respect"kidish"is no style of writing(for ur about me)
@meverch "wake up sid" jz came again as title,u r ryt the poem actualy started frm the second line......well thanx for readin it so well,all the corrections noted!:)
ReplyDeletethinking about something is providing energy to that too.... i believe.... i believe....think with all you are and the difference is there....new flavor of literary arrangement is amusing and one that can be easily welcomed... i like ... i like ....
ReplyDeletePRETENCE is like so many things is illuded by it's own origin and existence... thoughts as i wrote earlier are powerhouse itself .... you need not be in snow to get a chill.... it's much easy.... channelising your white and grey matter activity might be a key for that ...????????? i know not
ReplyDelete@joshi... you misunderstood a little there, i dint say you are pretending. I said we all do. I am struggling here to decode whatever sumit said but all i am saying is that there are thousands or may be thousands of thousands like us who like to think about it but don;t do anything about it and i don't see any point of it coz untill unless we do something on the actual ground, it will be as good as nothing for those who suffer, their life is not gonna get any better though i hope it works the way sumit is suggesting it to
ReplyDelete@gaurav...yesterday only i read these words of Mandella
ReplyDelete"sometimes you find inspiration through works of others,through songs,through poetries,i myself used to read a special poem which gave me inspiration to fight those tough times in jail"
nowhere i said that you should not be writing such stuff, and i do wanna hope that some Mandella will come up with such a statement about your work. I just wanted to share opinion that when we know where others are wrong,what's needed to be done, how important it is then too we just sit and do tea-time-talk about it....anyway my point could not be made here obviously. Keep up the good work buddy!
ReplyDeleteOk, I can only say that it seems good to see a old childhood friend turning to be a nice human being.
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ReplyDeletenice poem man with a very nice message... work as an eye opener...
ReplyDeletekeep writing...
@shreyans:thanx buddy......il kip writin alwaz at a new adress:)
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